{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23479321","dateCreated":"1272519513","smartDate":"Apr 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23479321"},"dateDigested":1532765152,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Car Presentation Schedules","description":"Alright you guys! We get to decide when we get to present! So better claim your spots soon!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23479323","body":"his is the sign up sheet for presentations for only Thursday and Friday. Please respond with what number slot on what day your group would like.
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\nIn an attempt to mimic the syntax of the example sentence, I placed my phrases in order of events. Since the example sentence provided begins with \u201cin,\u201d a prepositional phrase, I also used \u201cwhen,\u201d another prepositional phrase, to start off my newly arranged sentence. In addition, I placed \u201c\u2014of joy that kills\u201d at the end to reinforce the idea that Mrs. M died of happiness, not grief.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"22889791","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease, of joy that kills.
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\nAs many of my other colleagues, I also arranged my sentence this way. I felt the doctors had to come before the death to, as Grace mentioned, give the final verdict. The use of the comma between the disease and joy makes it gramatically correct, but it also helps to symbolize the split in the contrasting ideas of joy and happiness. Ending the sentence with joy also helps to portray a picture of a body with a smile still attached to it and to round off the story with a typical, sort of, happy ending.","dateCreated":"1271397340","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5JamesA","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JamesA","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253392716\/5JamesA-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22890025","body":""Of joy that kills, when the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease."
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\nWhile the large majority of my esteemed colleagues decided to place "of joy that kills" at the end of the sentence, I decided to go for broke and put it at the beginning. At the beginning of the sentence, it hits you over the head immediately and puts a slight twist on the whole thing. Also, placing her cause of death at the end of the sentence gives the reader an appropriate closure.","dateCreated":"1271399335","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5AustinB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AustinB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258929581\/5AustinB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22890217","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.
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\nSimilar to my other colleagues, I chose the em dash to emphasize the phrase "of joy that kills". The phrase appropriately summarizes the situation in a few words. Mrs M's "joy" represents her sudden shock while her heart disease delivered the final blow to "kill" her. The emphasis at the end of the sentence also provides a dramatic ending not only for the sentence but also the whole story.","dateCreated":"1271400680","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5kevinh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5kevinh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22890289","body":""When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease\u2014of joy that kills."
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\nI believe that heavy emphasis is needed on the phrase "of joy that kills" because it is such an ironic point within the story\/sentence. The grief that Mrs. M had felt had been built up so much that it seemed like she may actually pass away because of it. But to have her die out of joy, after all that had happened, was simply backwards. Also, it ads to the morbid realization that, in the end, her husband was alive, and she was the deceased one.","dateCreated":"1271401132","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5CourtneyK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5CourtneyK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258615166\/5CourtneyK-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22890291","body":""When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills."
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\nI arranged the sentence this way to create a periodic sentence. I chose to use a dash to emphasize the fact that she, ironically, died of joy.","dateCreated":"1271401148","smartDate":"Apr 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5LisaC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5LisaC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1263960251\/5LisaC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22890809","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease-- of joy that kills.
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\nAfter chuckling at the irony, I decided that this structure made the most sense. The first reason would have to be that any other order feels very uncomfortable to me. This arrangement presents the doctors and then their news in a way that makes sense. The comma and the -- build up the dramatic effect. Doctors came? She DIED?? Of what? She died of joy.","dateCreated":"1271405338","smartDate":"Apr 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5DennisC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5DennisC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1273222171\/5DennisC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22891051","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.
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\nThe sentence arrangement follows a chronological format. "When the doctors came" begins the sentence because it is an effective dependent clause, and it explains who "they" are. "They said she had died" quickly follows for a dramatic effect because the audience wonders, "Why did the doctors come? What will they figure out?" They figure out that she died. "Of heart disease" is an essential appositive clause that explains the causes of her death. Rather than stating that she had died of heart disease and joy that kills, "of joy that kills" can be separated from the sentence for a dramatic effect. The paradoxical phrase at the end becomes that much more effective, so that "of heart disease" may even be omitted, and the sentence can read, "They said she had died of joy that kills."","dateCreated":"1271407106","smartDate":"Apr 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5AlexL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AlexL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1249199165\/5AlexL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22901773","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease--of joy that kills.
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\n"When the doctors came" provides a smooth transition into the next part. The mega dash at the end emphasizes the fact that she was killed by joy.","dateCreated":"1271428132","smartDate":"Apr 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5KimL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KimL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22917005","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.
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\nI added the dependent clause in the beginning because it seemed to me that it flows better. I wanted to emphasize "of joy that kills" so I inserted it at the end with a "-."","dateCreated":"1271442315","smartDate":"Apr 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5SammyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5SammyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22964933","body":"When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease, of joy that kills.
\nThe first part of this sentence, "when the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease" is a very ordinary phrase that merely explains an accident. This part goes before "of joy that kills" to build tension. "When the doctors came" is merely an introduction, "they said she had died of heart disease" is the conflict, "of joy that kills" concludes this passage grandly as the murderer is discovered.","dateCreated":"1271636290","smartDate":"Apr 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5JudithL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JudithL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22976129","body":""When the doctors came, they said she had died of heart disease, of joy that kills."
\nThe statement is seemingly ordinary--one of the duties of a doctor include attributing a cause to a death--until the final clause. As Alex mentioned, the final phrase creates a sort of alternative sentence within the original sentence that reads, "They said she had died of joy that kills."","dateCreated":"1271666665","smartDate":"Apr 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5KennethT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KennethT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/5KennethT-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23027321","body":""When the doctors came, they said she had died of joy that kills--of heart disease."
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\nI put the phrase "when the..." and "they said..." because it is in chronological order, and it is best to be put together, making it less confusing for the reader. I also put "of joy that kills" before "of heart disease" because to me, it makes better sense to feel joy THEN to die of heart disease, than to die of heart disease and then feel joy.","dateCreated":"1271737745","smartDate":"Apr 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BerniceB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BerniceB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1266476903\/5BerniceB-lg.jpg"}}],"more":21}]},{"id":"20309583","dateCreated":"1266437180","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/20309583"},"dateDigested":1532765154,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ehrenreich DJ entry","description":"Please post a DJ entry for Ehrenreich's piece.
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\nIn this phrase, Ehrenreich uses the allusion to Mao to help demonstrate the jobs of the minimum-wage workers. As stated before, the minimum-wage workers are the "nonprincesses" implying that if they are not the royalty, they are the minions. Just as every kingdom needs to have workers to help, every society needs willing people to work the hard jobs. Her allusion states that minimum-wage workers are doing nothing wrong, so they are not to be totally ignored. The minions are only following directions that are given to them through the royalties of society as many of the Chinese followed the teachings of king Mao's red book. For society to ignore these people is unfair, for the minimum-wage workers are only doing what they are told, "To serve the people."","dateCreated":"1266475613","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5JamesA","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JamesA","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253392716\/5JamesA-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337089","body":"\u201cShe dips into her own tip money to buy biscuits and gravy for an out-of-work mechanic who\u2019s used up all his money on dental surgery, inspiring me to pick up the tab for his pie and milk\u201d (line 119).
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\nResponse: Compared to the beginning of the passage, Ehrenreich now speaks differently of the low-wage workers. Although she still perceives them as "nonprincesses," she points out with this detailed line the affection and humanity given off by the workers toward the consumers (116). In this sentence, it is evident that her tone towards low-wage workers changes, for she does not add condescending little remarks such as those about her superiority and how it's not her "actual life." She adds in this detail of Gail's kindness to the out-of-work mechanic to evoke thoughts, or even second-thoughts, about low-wage workers. It shows that even workers such as these can inspire her to not only simply "pick up the tab for his pie and milk," but also write a whole book about them (119).","dateCreated":"1266476015","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BerniceB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BerniceB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1266476903\/5BerniceB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337117","body":"Quote:
\n"I had been vain enough to worry about coming across as too educated for the jobs I sought, but no one even seems interested in finding out how overqualified I am." ( Lines 90-93)
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\nEhrenreich displays her snug attitude in the description of being "overqualified" for the menial jobs at hand. Despite the vain veneer, she realizes the harsh truth: In the low-income field of work, there are no set prerequisites. No one cares how qualified you are; there are no distinctions between a Greek or Jew.","dateCreated":"1266476205","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5StephanieW","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5StephanieW","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253401916\/5StephanieW-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337121","body":"Quote:
\n"I had been vain enough to worry about coming across as too educated for the jobs I sought, but no one even seems interested in finding out how overqualified I am." ( Lines 90-93)
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\nEhrenreich displays her snug attitude in the description of being "overqualified" for the menial jobs at hand. Despite the vain veneer, she realizes the harsh truth: In the low-income field of work, there are no set prerequisites. No one cares how qualified you are; there are no distinctions between a Greek or Jew.","dateCreated":"1266476206","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5StephanieW","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5StephanieW","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253401916\/5StephanieW-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337203","body":"Quote: My next stop is Winn-Dixie, the supermarket, which turns out to have a particularly onerous application process, featuring a twenty-minute "interview" by computer since, no human on the premises is deemed capable of representing the corporate point of viej.
\nEhrenreich continues establishing a sarcastic tone by using the word "onerous", or extremely annoying, to describe the application process; she puts quotes around her computer "interview" to show its insincerity. The phrase "no human on the premises is deemed capable of representing the corporate point of view" to show her reader that not even the company put much faith in the ability of its low-wage employees. This supersentence is connected by four commas, establishing the effect of an angry person, who when she sees a friend, erupts with the story and never stops to take a breath until the whole story is spewed out. No doubt that the privileged reader, when undergoing her situation, will think the same way.","dateCreated":"1266476506","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5JudithL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JudithL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337443","body":"\u201cThis finally happens to me at one of the big discount chain hotels where I go, as usual, for housekeeping and am sent instead to try out as a waitress at the attached \u2018family restaurant,\u2019 a dismal spot looking out on a parking garage, which is featuring \u2018Pollish sausage and BBQ sauce\u2019 on this 95-degree day.\u201d (99-103)
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\nI really like the imagery Ehrenreich presents in this quote as she expresses how decrepit her new job is by describing her surroundings. She first describes the hotels as \u201cbig..chain hotels\u201d which strikes the idea that her new job may be for a respectable hotel, but the subtle addition of \u201cdiscount\u201d creates an entirely new connotation. It gives a sense that something is cheaper because it is not wanted, which brings us to the conclusion that her job really is despicable. She then puts quotes around family restaurant, questioning its authenticity, as it looks out \u201con a parking garage.\u201d A parking garage. When I read that, I immediately thought of a run-down, shady restaurant that doesn\u2019t sell much except fat and grease, disguised as \u201cPollish sausage and BBQ sauce.\u201d","dateCreated":"1266477738","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20337705","body":"\u201cAt the Palms, let\u2019s call it, a bouncy manager actually takes me around to see the rooms the current housekeepers, who, I note with satisfaction, look pretty much like me--faded ex-hippie types in shorts with long hair pulled back in braids\u201d (80-83)
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\nEhrenreich uses description to give readers a clear image of the housekeepers; she describes as \u201cfaded ex-hippie types\u201d. She suggests that all workers are impersonal and generic (13) , these housekeepers fit her description of a worker. Several consumers just \u201cthoughtlessly throw money around in exchange for groceries\u201d (5) from a worker without a second glance at the worker. The consumer does not respect the worker and sees the common worker as trash-- little does the consumer know, the worker is the backbone of the economy; the worker keeps society running. Ehrenreich wants to change that; the worker is much more than a generic supplier. The worker is actually a person with feelings; an actual human being that such be treated as such.","dateCreated":"1266479572","smartDate":"Feb 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5RobertL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5RobertL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258925862\/5RobertL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20338025","body":""The interview is multiple-choice: Do I have anything, such as child care problems, that might make it hard for me to get to work on time? Do I think safety on the job is the responsibility of the management? Then, popping up cunningly out of the blue: How many dollars' worth of stolen goods have I purchased in the last year? Would I turn in a fellow employee if I caught him stealing? Finally,'are you an honest person?'"(60-65)
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\nReflection: Perhaps I took too long of a quotation, but there is something very important in this sentence. Basically, she just starts off with some normal questions, then says "cunningly out of the blue". This ties in to her overlying sarcasm, with her message of we see the minimum-waged as a mass anonymous legion with no personality or brain activity. This feeling is clearly shown by whomever designed the test, as they feel the need to ask exactly how many stolen goods the potential employee has bought.","dateCreated":"1266481300","smartDate":"Feb 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5DennisC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5DennisC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1273222171\/5DennisC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20338663","body":"\u201cStill it is a shock to realize that \u201ctrailer trash\u201d has become, for me a demographic category to aspire to.\u201d
\nThis sentence is shocking and leaves us wondering why she has sunk so low. It also emphasizes her loss of pride and dignity. She is disrespecting people who live in trailers by calling them, \u201ctrailer trash,\u201d but at the same time, she almost is disrespecting herself.","dateCreated":"1266485999","smartDate":"Feb 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MarkL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MarkL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222828869\/5MarkL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20338745","body":"Quote: "I had been vain enough to worry about coming across as too educated for the jobs I sought, but no one even seems interested in finding out how overqualified I am."
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\nEhrenreich's pride gets the best of her in the job application process because she realizes how "overqualified" she is. From her own point of view, we know she is indeed overqualified because of her reputation as an established writer. Her pride and her view as a higher status promotes her to think that she would be "too educated." I find her statement ironic in that she was "terrified of being recognized" (lines 6-7) and now she's worried of not being recognized for her overqualified work. She uses the word "vain" to imply that she knows she is perfectly suited for any minimum-wage job; yet, the harsh reality sets in that opportunities aren't always guaranteed to everyone even if he or she is qualified.","dateCreated":"1266486564","smartDate":"Feb 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5kevinh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5kevinh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20342527","body":""I am terrified, especially at the beginning, of being recognized..." (line 6-9)
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\nEhrenreich states that she is "terrified" to let the reader she is afraid of being noticed. She does not want anybody to notice her because it would blow her cover. The word "stammer" tells the reader that Ehrenreich would be ashamed or embarrassed to be caught in such a situation. She is used to purchasing items, being a consumer, and not a provider. Ehrenreich was a "thoughtlessly throwing money around in exchange for groceries and movies and gas" person (line 5-6). The main reason Ehrenreich is scared of being recognized is because she is too proud of her real social status. She does not want people to see that she has climbed down the social ladder, whether it be out of research or anything else.","dateCreated":"1266501821","smartDate":"Feb 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20345679","body":""Three days go by like this and, to my chagrin, no one from the approximately twenty places at which I've applied calls me for an interview. I had been vain enough to worry about coming across as too educated for the jobs I sought..." (Lines 88-90)
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\nEhrenreich shows her pride and how hurt it was when most of the places she sent applications to never returned an answer. She was, to the point that, too worried that she'll be too educated or overqualified for the jobs she sought, a thought that may have come from being a high-class established writer. She is snapped out of her fantasy of being high and mighty when she realizes that her "overqualifications" do not mean anything in her new life.","dateCreated":"1266505257","smartDate":"Feb 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5SammyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5SammyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":24}]},{"id":"19066559","dateCreated":"1263943886","smartDate":"Jan 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5mickiew","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5mickiew","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258931227\/5mickiew-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/19066559"},"dateDigested":1532765155,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Kingsolver Prompt","description":"Barbara Kingsolver is able to reach out to her readers by narrating her encounters of experiences that have shown knowledge of agriculture. In her book; Animal, Vegetable, miracle: A Year of Food Life, Kingsolver says, "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better." People will sacrifice the greater goods in favor of their own comfort and convenience.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"19078585","body":"Kingsolver believes, "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better." However, there are others who oppose this idea because many people would rather favor comfort and convenience over the greater ecological good.","dateCreated":"1263968062","smartDate":"Jan 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleH","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleH","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19078671","body":"In "Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food Life", Barbara Kingsolver's assertion that, "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better," is not valid in today's society, especially towards Americans in general.","dateCreated":"1263969034","smartDate":"Jan 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BennyT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BennyT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1243575176\/5BennyT-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19078747","body":"Based on her book, "Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food Life," Barbara Kingsolver claims that "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better." However, even with such knowledgeable information, Americans in general tend to abandon the greater ecological good in favor of their own convenience.","dateCreated":"1263970021","smartDate":"Jan 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19078981","body":"In "Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food Life", Barbara Kingsolver chides the American populace by stating, "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better". Perhaps we would become less ecologically wasteful; sadly, her message falls short in a culture championing convenience before consequence.","dateCreated":"1263972967","smartDate":"Jan 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BramV","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BramV","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252989986\/5BramV-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19079439","body":"In Barbara Kingsolver's book, "Animal, Vegetable, Mineral," Kingsolver makes the fallacious and oversimplified assumption that, "We'd [Americans] surely do better if only we knew any better." Not defining "better" was only the first problem in her idealistic mindset, her view of humanity as displayed in that statement and, subsequently, her arguements pertaining to it.","dateCreated":"1263979282","smartDate":"Jan 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MarkL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MarkL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222828869\/5MarkL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19079449","body":"Sorry, I forgot to put the last part to my response!
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\nIn Barbara Kingsolver's book, "Animal, Vegetable, Mineral," Kingsolver makes the fallacious and oversimplified assumption that, "We'd [Americans] surely do better if only we knew any better." Not defining "better" was only the first problem in her idealistic mindset, her view of humanity as displayed in that statement and, subsequently, her arguements pertaining to it is completely flawed.","dateCreated":"1263979344","smartDate":"Jan 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5MarkL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MarkL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222828869\/5MarkL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19079783","body":"Barbara Kingsolver's theory presented in her book, "Animal, Vegetable, Mineral: A Year of Food Life," advocates that "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better." This assertion is completely false as most if not all Americans would decide to desert the idea of becoming eco-friendly than the idea of living in comfort.","dateCreated":"1263983292","smartDate":"Jan 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5SammyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5SammyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19164193","body":"In Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food Life, Brabara Kingsolver states that, "We'd surely do better if only we knew better." However, her assertion is invalid, for many people would not sacrifice their comfort and convenience just the greater ecological good.","dateCreated":"1264126620","smartDate":"Jan 21, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BerniceB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BerniceB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1266476903\/5BerniceB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19206605","body":"Barbara Kingsolver has made the assertion in her book, "Animal, Vegetable, Mineral: A Year of Food Life", very clear: "We'd surely do better if only we knew better." In other words, ignorance renders us oblivious, but even with the proper knowledge, little will change. These assertions are not achievable.","dateCreated":"1264211647","smartDate":"Jan 22, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5HeidiC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5HeidiC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1243553137\/5HeidiC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19238079","body":"Barbara Kingsolver makes a hulking assumption of human nature in her book Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food Life by stating that Americans would \u201csurely do better if only we knew any better\u201d (15). History and society often stand as examples of the contrary to Kingsolver\u2019s supposition.","dateCreated":"1264377668","smartDate":"Jan 24, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5KennethT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KennethT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/5KennethT-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"19729477","body":"Kingsolver asserts that, "We'd surely do better if only we knew any better;" however, that is hardly the case. People tend to sacrifice the greater ecological good in favor of their own comfort and convenience.","dateCreated":"1265262221","smartDate":"Feb 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5AlexL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AlexL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1249199165\/5AlexL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"20492543","body":"Barbara Kingsolver asserts in Animal, Vegetable, Miracle: A Year of Food that Americans would sacrifice much for the greater ecological good, \u201cif only we knew any better\u201d (15); however, this is not so.","dateCreated":"1266823209","smartDate":"Feb 21, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5RachelW","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5RachelW","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":18}]},{"id":"18301899","dateCreated":"1261074909","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/18301899"},"dateDigested":1532765157,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Persuasive Paragraph","description":"Type your persuasive paragraph here!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"18326711","body":"Many Americans in today\u2019s society are considered obese because of their lack of exercise and unhealthy eating habits. Because many people would rather not give up their eating habits, exercising is the best method to stay healthy. There is no better way to exercise than to play tennis. Tennis is an amazing sport; it combines a great work out with amazing fun. Muscles, such as the biceps, triceps, forearms, and especially the calves, are constantly used when playing the sport. The constant motion needed to keep up with the lightning fast tennis ball keeps the player in a constant motion, working out much of the leg muscles. The arm strokes involved in returning the balls strengthen the arms and keep it in perfect condition. Catching the tennis ball on your tennis racquet will help improve hand-eye coordination; naturally your reflexes will get better as your eyes accustom to the speed of the ball. With all this motion involved in playing tennis, you are bound to stay in tip top shape. Along with the workout, you\u2019ll also notice that it is a great way to interact with your friends. You will begin to experience the friendly rivalries that will form when tennis becomes a part of both your lives. There\u2019s nothing on Earth better than tennis. Tennis is a combination of a great work out and a whole lot of fun; it is bound to give anyone that plays a great time.","dateCreated":"1261118308","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JamesA","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JamesA","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253392716\/5JamesA-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18326725","body":"Humans have taken over the world. We have pushed wilderness to the corners of the earth and to the brinks of remote islands. Animals struggle to survive in today's wilderness, not to mention that poachers, human beings, are hunting them mercilessly for their tusks, for their horns, for their lush fur. It's up to us now, to protect the few that remain. There are only 40 Amur Leopards left in the world. No more than 64 Javan Rhinos. It's up to us to give them and their descendants the best chance at life that they can have. True, we are taking away their freedom by placing them in zoos. But what is freedom to an animal? Do they even realize that they are confined, that they are robbed of their will, as Heidi put it? In well-managed zoos, they are protected. They are fed. They are given acres to roam as they wish. They can reproduce and pass on their genes. Due to the mistakes and transgressions of our ancestors, it is up to us now to give back these animals their wilderness; however, this cannot happen unless modifications are made to their habitats. The poachers must go. The unblemished, ancient forests of 5,000 years ago must come back. Only by doing this, can we ensure their survival.","dateCreated":"1261118432","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5RachelW","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5RachelW","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18326811","body":"Homework. This term is generally meant to describe work that is to be done at home. So, why are there a countless number of students struggeling to complete their assignments during silent reading? Some say that this is due to the heavy procrastination practiced by many students these days. However, they are not always the ones to blame. During the school day, students receive assignment after assignment from all of their teachers. By the time the last bell rings, most have at least one thing to do for each class. Though, each teacher figures that they have not assigned that much for the day, after having seven classes, it tends to add up. Yet, many teachers seem to be surprised by the lack of reading and high amounts of writing that occur during SSR. Perhaps the finger should be pointed some where else before it lands on the student.","dateCreated":"1261119571","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5CourtneyK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5CourtneyK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258615166\/5CourtneyK-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18326851","body":"I want to begin by saying I think you have a great point, Mickie. With having signed up for this class and looking for a challenge, I have decided to tackle a difficult argument. Tiger Woods is not to blame for the recent firestorm surrounding his personal life. Adultery is in no way ethical, and in no way do i condone it. However, part of me sympathizes for Mr. Woods. None of us peasants truly understand what it is like to be in his position. His stature is something that is nearly unparalleled in today's world. Recently voted the Associated Press Athlete of the Decade for his accomplishments on the golf course, he must feel like God. Every day, many spouses have affairs and the majority of those go unheard of. Those people are just as wrong, and it is not fair to patronize Tiger Woods any further than them. Also, no reports have surfaced yet that he is an unfit father. As far as the public knows, he has been a great dad for his adolescent children. You can never really understand someone's situation until you walk a mile in their shoes. There are very few people that know the true story of everything that is happening. Please let Tiger Woods deal with this matter in privacy.","dateCreated":"1261120219","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5AustinB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AustinB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258929581\/5AustinB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18326921","body":"An immense humanitarian crisis resulted from the mass displacement of Darfurian civilians during 2003. From direct attacks from two Darfuri rebel movements - the Sudan Liberation Movement and Justice and Equality Movement, and the deterioration of living conditions, many experts estimate that as many as 300,000 people lost their lives between 2003 and 2005. In September 2004, President George W. Bush declared the crisis in Darfur a \u201cgenocide\u201d \u2013 the first time a sitting American president had made such a declaration regarding an ongoing conflict while the violence continued in Darfur and the number of dead and displaced increased considerably. Despite harsh conditions, there is still hope to preserve Darfur and to encourage it's inhabitants to reside peacefully. Darfur needs all the help it can receive to establish itself back on it's feet.","dateCreated":"1261121164","smartDate":"Dec 17, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5BerniceB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BerniceB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1266476903\/5BerniceB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18327103","body":"Humor is very simple: take a subject and poke fun at it. Humor is always at someone or something\u2019s expense, so why not laugh at life? Laugh at the many frivolities and trivialities of life as crafted by human hands. Laugh at the life that humankind can never cease to further complicate, as burdens continue to be self-imposed onto the back of humanity. Life used to be simple: humans either hunted or farmed and later reaped the rewards of a day of simple, honest work at the end of the day around a warm, crackling fire. Life is now a complicated machine filled with manmade parts: the global economy is a jumble no single person can dream of fully understanding; social relationships around the world are fraught with artificial drama; and bureaucracy hides behind mountains of paperwork while hoping to confuse adventurers with paper trails that lead nowhere. Of course, life still chugs along smoothly enough. Of course, this means that everything is fine and dandy, so go and laugh at life because it just works in the oddest of ways.","dateCreated":"1261124197","smartDate":"Dec 18, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5KennethT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KennethT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/5KennethT-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18327285","body":" Temperatures in the Arctic regions are rising twice as fast as any other location in the world. As a result, the polar ice caps are melting; slowly, but surely, they are disappearing. Along with the shrinking of the ice, the population of creatures associated with the North Pole is also diminishing. The black and white penguins that depend on krill are finding that the shrimp, once teeming in the ocean, are now scarce. The decrease of algae growth, due to global warming, has lowered the population of krill, which in turn, is lowering the amount of tuxedoed birds. It is a chain reaction. Likewise, the population of seals, an important food source of polar bears, has been decreasing dramatically, putting the bears in peril. Creatures are also losing their homes; their frozen homes are beginning to thaw. What was the cause of all this? Global warming; but who or what caused global warming? We did. Though we can\u2019t stop global warming now, we can slow it down by reducing the amount of carbon gases being released into the atmosphere. If everyone were to reduce their carbon footprints, we could save the penguins, the arctic foxes, and the polar bears from disappearing. Because we are the problem, it is our responsibility to be the solution.","dateCreated":"1261127783","smartDate":"Dec 18, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5KimL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KimL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18327327","body":"The movie "Brothers" has recently been released. It is one of the best films this year; you will not regret watching it. This movie appeals to real life situations about disloyal relationships between wives and husbands. During this movie, I burst into tears, I laughed in joy, and I cursed in my head at times of frustration. The actors and actresses really did a terrific job in playing their roles and made it as realistic as can be. If you served in the army, went to war, were captured by the enemy and forced to kill your best friend, then come home realizing your children has forgotten you and that the love of your life is sleeping with your sibling, what would you do? Watch this deeply moving film and grasp the reality of it all.","dateCreated":"1261128658","smartDate":"Dec 18, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5LisaC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5LisaC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1263960251\/5LisaC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18327563","body":"Always think before you decide to do it. Is it a smart choice? Will it help or hurt you? Naps--the Trojan Horse in a student's life--can never be trusted. They appear harmless, beneficial even, providing the much needed rest after consecutive all-nighters, but in reality, they are time-consumers. Disgustingly greedy little monsters who devour the preciously few hours you have that can be spent doing homework or studying. Just when you think that those nine alarm clocks can save you from the dark abyss of a nap, you are wrong. Once you have taken the plunge, it is a struggle to swim back to the surface. Do not even think about "resting your eyes," as that is the time when you are most vulnerable. Naps hone in on you and attack with everything they have, forcing you into that five hour coma. They thirst for your destruction, pray for chaos and mayhem when you wake up to find that you have finished none of your work. They sit back, relaxed after a job well done, to soak in your panic. Naps that taunt and lure poor defenseless students into their grimy claws with this so-called "rest," are evil. They are really more trouble than they are worth. Now remember that you have been warned, and when you fall prey to Naps, you can not escape.","dateCreated":"1261131956","smartDate":"Dec 18, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18498921","body":"Because of its many opportunities and chances, the United States of America is the best country to live in. America has absolutely no discrimination against anyone and treats everyone equal as the Deceleration of Independence states, " All men are created equal". Also the American Dream invites any one and everyone who wants to succeed in life to jump on a plane and come to the United States of America for a happy and better life. America is the melting pot which accepts anyone. Also, if one lives in America, it is better for ones health because of the Americans who seem to cure everything. It was the Americans who cured tuberculosis and polio and produced the CT and MRI scan. If one decides to live in America, one will live a long happy life. But most importantly, America grants freedom. It was the Americans who drove out the Nazis all by themselves and it was America who tore down the Berlin Wall. America provides everything a person might need and America is the answer to any immigration inquiries.","dateCreated":"1262222916","smartDate":"Dec 30, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JoyceK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JoyceK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1267237532\/5JoyceK-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18533685","body":"Childhood is vanishing. Slowly but surely. Adult life slowly creeps over the playgrounds like a mist. This is because children are accessing newer technology, watch rated-R films, and are pressed down by school, all at frighteningly young ages. Where are the carefree days of summer? Spent by 10 year olds screaming obscenities over Xbox Live or texting each other on cell-phones. The days of Sesame Street and the Muppets? Spent watching movies like Saw and American Pie. Today\u2019s 8-10 year olds are being burdened with cartel sized backpacks loaded with textbooks. No wonder rolling backpacks have been invented. Some of these activities, like watching R-rated films, weren\u2019t problems 35 years ago. Most adults 35 years ago didn\u2019t even have internet at home. Humans are mentally, emotional and physically designed for a long childhood, brief adolescence, and then adulthood. With the way society is changing, catering less to children and more to adults, it\u2018s no wonder childhood is receding. Nowadays I don\u2019t see children any more, just smaller adults.","dateCreated":"1262566536","smartDate":"Jan 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5BramV","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BramV","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252989986\/5BramV-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"18607841","body":"It\u2019s that time of the year again\u2014Christmas. It\u2019s the time of year when velvety reds and earthy greens dominate the color wheel, while oddly-placed evergreens adorn snow-laden streets. Families proudly flaunt hand-sewn sweaters, hover about smoldering Yule logs, and gaze at them dreamily, entranced by the flames\u2019 sporadic waltz. Snowflakes cascade outside, briefly greeting home-dwellers at their windows before gently drifting down to their snow beds below. Does this even vaguely sound like your Christmas? Here in Los Angeles, on Christmas day, we are greeted by a thick cloud of pollution, whose grime is accentuated by the sun\u2019s intense rays. Our idea of snow is painted haphazardly on the advertisements of Christmas blow-out sales. Our evergreens are not evergreens at all; rather, they are assembled by the same plastic that forms synthetic grass. Los Angeles is not the city for Christmas. I\u2019m sure that its people have never even heard of Yule logs or have even seen a snowflake. The description above is not from a fantastical dream world; just look at Germany. You must spend a Christmas there. The bustling Christmas markets, towering nutcrackers, aroma of woodcarvings, and sound of street performers instill a sense of Christmas and national unity. When\u2019s the last time you felt that?","dateCreated":"1262758592","smartDate":"Jan 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"5AlexL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AlexL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1249199165\/5AlexL-lg.jpg"}}],"more":20}]},{"id":"17352993","dateCreated":"1259093540","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17352993"},"dateDigested":1532765158,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"SAM BAM RAM and Kenneth","description":"You know the drill!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17353425","body":"I liked your angle as business men. It was very informative and I enjoyed some humor added to your presentation. You had great examples and that was helpful. You should probably include less words on your slides. The color of your background clashes with the words. But other than that, Nice Job! Thank you for sharing!","dateCreated":"1259094170","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5mickiew","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5mickiew","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258931227\/5mickiew-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353427","body":"Just like Harrison and Judith, I loved the humor put into the presentation. I also loved that both Sam and Kenneth interacted with the audience with funny remarks, comments, and such. I also believed that they were very informative towards Dumpster diving. Their angle was rather simple and that's okay, because they made it much more interesting with what they were saying throughout the presentation.","dateCreated":"1259094171","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5BerniceB","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BerniceB","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1266476903\/5BerniceB-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353431","body":"It was very entertaining and humorous. I really liked how the power point had hilarious pictures and bolded font to emphasize a point. This helped me focus and completely comprehend what the topic was about. I also enjoyed how you played off each other creating a light and interesting atmosphere.","dateCreated":"1259094178","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleH","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleH","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353437","body":"Drugs are bad mkay? The angle was very effective and convincing. The presentation was very eye-catching and informative. Applause to Sam for his outright enthusiastic performance. I'm sold! Good job you two.","dateCreated":"1259094181","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"4MonicaC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/4MonicaC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252976604\/4MonicaC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353445","body":"Pretty funny presentation. All the slides were enjoyable, and the light humor was a nice touch. Although Sam makes a pretty bad business man.","dateCreated":"1259094189","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JayL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JayL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1261115493\/5JayL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353455","body":"It seemed like your angle targets businessmen, but your actual presentation was a bit unfocused. I'd acquired all the information you provided from the article before. You guys stated great facts, but I'm not entirely convinced because I could not see your angle. But humor was much appreciated.","dateCreated":"1259094198","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyH","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyH","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353457","body":"I liked your dramatic presentation, and that you were pretending to be businesspeople. However, it was kind of strage for me that you were advertising something that hurts your business. I liked how you referred to tips given by Eighner from the text, but I could not see a clear theme except that Dumpster Diving is good although one should be cautious doing it.","dateCreated":"1259094199","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JudithL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JudithL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353459","body":"FREE! I like how you two took on the positions of businessmen even though that seemed somewhat ironic. Your presentation was captivating, enthusiastic, and enjoyable. It brought on some good points and definitely educates a person on what should and should not be done.","dateCreated":"1259094200","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5HeidiC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5HeidiC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1243553137\/5HeidiC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353463","body":"I liked your dramatic presentation, and that you were pretending to be businesspeople. However, it was kind of strage for me that you were advertising something that hurts your business. I liked how you referred to tips given by Eighner from the text, but I could not see a clear theme except that Dumpster Diving is good although one should be cautious doing it.","dateCreated":"1259094208","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JudithL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JudithL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353467","body":"Their presentation was funny and was prepared well. Their view that it was a good opportunity to find objects was very interesting. But i think presenting it in their business format was not as great seeing as many business people want their business to succeed. And one thing that could be improved is to make their presentation a bit more legible. Otherwise their presentation wasn't that bad.","dateCreated":"1259094212","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JamesA","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JamesA","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253392716\/5JamesA-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353505","body":"They were both really great speakers. Sam had enthusiasm, but used the words "alright, umm, so, and ya" enough to be noticeable. Kennith did not stutter at all, and was consistent in his speaking, except that Kennith could have been a little louder. Great job on the speaking though.
\nThe Power Point was very effective, they used many interesting pictures that helped to give their point. Their approach was interesting, they mainly held this approach through their attire and speech. I agree with Stephanie, that Kennith was the Suave businessman.","dateCreated":"1259094266","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5MarkL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MarkL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1222828869\/5MarkL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17379323","body":"First of all, I liked your view point a lot. Very unique! (and pretty funny) Overall, pretty good job on the presentation, a few points were unclear, but nothing to worry about.","dateCreated":"1259128420","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5CourtneyK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5CourtneyK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258615166\/5CourtneyK-lg.jpg"}}],"more":21}]},{"id":"17352799","dateCreated":"1259093324","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17352799"},"dateDigested":1532765159,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Harrison and Judith","description":"Share!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17352991","body":"I loved this presentation! It was entertaining yet insightful. It kept my attention and kept me entertained. Harrison and Judith focused on Dumpster diving as a form of exercise. There was so much use of color, humor, and pop culture in this presentation, it was easier for me to relate to it.","dateCreated":"1259093538","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5GraceT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5GraceT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352995","body":"Like everyone else, I thought it was cool how they approached dumpster diving from an exercise point of view. It would have been nice if they didn't ruin my eyes with that picture of the fat couple.","dateCreated":"1259093540","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JayL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JayL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1261115493\/5JayL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352997","body":"I loved your presentation!!! It was VERY clever and you made it very believable! Though I, myself, wouldn't dumpster dive for exercise, you made me consider it... for a second.","dateCreated":"1259093542","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5KimL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KimL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353005","body":"Very well done Harrison and Judith! I really enjoyed listening to your presentation. I loved your Dumpster Workout theme! There were enough information given on the slides. I don't think there are any changes that can be made. It was very well done. Way to go!","dateCreated":"1259093547","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5mickiew","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5mickiew","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258931227\/5mickiew-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353013","body":"Your presentation was fantastic! Your angle (athletics) was brilliant and appealed to those already fit and to those weaklings you mentioned. The the slides contained bite-sized info, easily digested. The humor poignantly accented the silliness of dumpster diving. A louder, more enthusiastic presentation would have been nice. But on the whole, an admirable job.","dateCreated":"1259093563","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5BramV","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BramV","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252989986\/5BramV-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353041","body":"THAT WAS AMAZING!!! I really really loved your presentation. It is both creative and entertaining; out of all the possible angles, I didn't even think about weight training! Everything was clearly explained, and you not only discussed each point but you also expanded on each subject (which I think is extremely important).
\nJudith, you did an amazing job and I loved the humor you put into the presentation.
\nHarrison, you were equally as fantastic in presenting and I really loved all the comparisons you guys added.
\nGood Job! :]","dateCreated":"1259093605","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353045","body":"Their presentation was very unique and actually quite comical. Their message was clear and they did a good job presenting.","dateCreated":"1259093612","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5CourtneyK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5CourtneyK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258615166\/5CourtneyK-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353055","body":"Wow! That was interesting and hilarious! I like your angle because it is really unique and I never thought of Dumpster Diving as a workout. The pictures and comparisons in the end proved your point of Diver's Workout. I don't think there is anything that needs to be improved upon. Great job!","dateCreated":"1259093627","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5TeresaL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TeresaL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1264391409\/5TeresaL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353091","body":"As for constructive criticism, be more relaxed! Also, try to be more in tune with one another and work off each other, rather than each person read alternative slides.","dateCreated":"1259093665","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5AlexL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5AlexL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1249199165\/5AlexL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353307","body":"I liked their point that dumpster diving can be a great work out, even if it is a bit messy. Their slides in their presentation really showed an understanding on the topic and their angle on dumpster diving. I never really thought of it as an exercise. Overall, the presentation was well organized.","dateCreated":"1259094047","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JamesA","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JamesA","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253392716\/5JamesA-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353315","body":"I loved the pictures Harrison and Judith posted on their projects. It would be interesting if they showed an actual demonstration of "Diving Exercise."","dateCreated":"1259094051","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5SamL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5SamL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253238152\/5SamL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17353393","body":"The exercise angle was enjoyably creative. The pictures were well placed and humorous. Overall, the presentation was very straightforward with little repetition. I was persuaded to enlist in the workout regime.","dateCreated":"1259094130","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5KennethT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KennethT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/5KennethT-lg.jpg"}}],"more":22}]},{"id":"17352063","dateCreated":"1259092439","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17352063"},"dateDigested":1532765161,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Benny and Elizabeth","description":"Share. What did you learn? What was their angle? What did they do well? What could they improve upon? Was their message clear? Were you convinced?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17352513","body":"I learned that many materials found in Dumpsters can be used for a vast majority of different things. I would have never thought about using those materials to host a party. Their angle was using items found in the Dumpsters as a smart and economical way to have parties. I think that they could have been more descriptive with the items. Also, pictures of people hosting parties with the materials found in Dumpsters would have been more compelling. Overall, I really liked their presentation. Their opening page was my favorite because I really liked how the 'ET' was used.","dateCreated":"1259092888","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5GraceT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5GraceT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352539","body":"I learned that Dumpster Diving is an convenient method to all your money problems. Whether it be a anniversary party, birthday party, or preparing an entree, dumpster diving provides the necessities. The power point presentation throughly covered my questions. However, for future reference, I think probably eye contact should be utilized. Than, the audience would fell more engaged with the speakers.","dateCreated":"1259092903","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5StephanieW","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5StephanieW","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1253401916\/5StephanieW-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352551","body":"I learned from their presentation that many things, such as items used at parties, could be found in dumpster. It was informative but I could not really decide what the angle was. I feel that the presentation could have been a bit more appealing to the eye, as in more pictures and such. I could not hear the speakers clearly and I was not completely convinced of what they were trying to present.","dateCreated":"1259092908","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"4MonicaC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/4MonicaC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252976604\/4MonicaC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352559","body":"Their presentation got right to the point. They spoke clearly, and did well in explaining what their angle was. Their message was clear. I think they did a very good job in presenting.","dateCreated":"1259092916","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5CourtneyK","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5CourtneyK","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1258615166\/5CourtneyK-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352563","body":"I really liked the content of your presentation; there were lots of supporting details and good suggestions. Also, I liked how you introduced yourselves first, and that you alternated in the presentation of the slides.
\nYou were also loud enough for me to hear every word!","dateCreated":"1259092919","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JudithL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JudithL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352569","body":"It was really fun to listen to! I thought it was really creative that you were looking at dumpster diving at a sports\/news reporting angle.
\nI learned that you can find any basic necessity in a dumpster, especially if you have an upcoming party on your calendar. I can just jump into a dumpster to find all my supplies, and it'll make me feel even better knowing that I am helping the environment.
\nThough I would have preferred if Elizabeth spoke a bit louder and if you guys could expand more on your information, rather than read it off the slide. But overall, well done!","dateCreated":"1259092924","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5TiffanyC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5TiffanyC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352585","body":"Their angle is based on the things in the dumpsters being free. What they are saying is basically you can live a fulfilled life and throw parties just by diving into dumpsters. They stuck to their point really well and gave us estimates of how much a party would cost if you buy the materials in contrast to gathering the materials from a dumpster. They should improve on digging deeper and find something more realistic, because I doubt that you throw such a great party with things you find in a dumpster. I am not convinced.","dateCreated":"1259092939","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5LisaC","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5LisaC","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1263960251\/5LisaC-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352639","body":"- I learned that a dumpster is a good resource no matter which way you look at it.
\n
\n-Their angle, I believe, was using dumpster materials to enhance your lifestyle.
\n
\n-They had pretty sound points, which was good. They could have been louder and more informative. Adding resources would have helped, too.
\n
\n-Their message was obscure because of the different uses for dumpster items. Was the message about parties, dinners, or what?
\n
\n-I was convinced enough to try dumpster diving as a dilettante, but not enough to be a devotee.","dateCreated":"1259093007","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5BramV","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5BramV","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1252989986\/5BramV-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352793","body":"The attitude, tone and voice volume made the presentation interesting and enjoyable. The topic was completely covered and the arguments were convincing. Not reading off the presentation would be an improvement. There wasn't a lot of eye contact. Overall, the presentation was intriguing and the message was clear.","dateCreated":"1259093323","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleH","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleH","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352809","body":"The attitude, tone and voice volume made the presentation interesting and enjoyable. The topic was completely covered and the arguments were convincing. Not reading off the presentation would be an improvement. There wasn't a lot of eye contact. Overall, the presentation was intriguing and the message was clear.","dateCreated":"1259093336","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5MichelleH","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5MichelleH","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352819","body":"Pretty solid presentation. Their presentation was really informative, but nothing really stood out. But again, everything else was pulled off well. There were nice pictures and solid points.","dateCreated":"1259093352","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5JayL","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5JayL","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1261115493\/5JayL-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17352831","body":"They took the angle of a news report that used comparison and example. The presentation's focus on examples was informational, but it introduced the notion that a single dumpster would contain all necessary supplies. The message was clear in that dumpster diving is an alternative lifestyle, but I wasn't entirely convinced.","dateCreated":"1259093375","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"5KennethT","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/5KennethT","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/5KennethT-lg.jpg"}}],"more":23}]},{"id":"17351427","dateCreated":"1259091621","smartDate":"Nov 24, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"msvpark","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/msvpark","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/msvpark-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/room503juniors.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17351427"},"dateDigested":1532765162,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"VOCABULARY","description":"WRITE A SENTENCE USING ONE OF THE VOCABULARY WORDS.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17351653","body":"Tranquility is achieved when there is absolute peace and 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